" Slippin' Away From Me" Let Me Know What You Think....Again

28 Flathead

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Once more, I'm not a song writer or recording engineer, but occasionally I come up with a little instrumental (not a lyricist or singer either) and record it on garage band.


When I was doing this one, my wife's Uncle was dying, her Aunt called and when I answered the phone she said "I think my husband is slipping away from me"


So there you have it. Let me know what you think, criticism and suggestions are welcome.

 

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Nice. And though the source of the title would for everyone else call for composition in a minor key and not so lively a tempo, The title also can suggest not the "slipping away" of the life of a loved one, but the slipping away of a relationship. Keep at it and you might find someone who can give it appropriate lyrics.

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At first the accompaniment threw me off, but once the main melody came in I kinda got your message! Really cool.
 


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